The Ending Of Partnership?

*The camera zooms in on Mr Torture and Sylwester Tyrone talking*
Sylwester: ''Who cares what the audience think, they are just pathetic fools. This business is pointless, we aren't even getting good pay! You know what? We are going to leave now!''
Mr Torture: '''Me........Stay.........Here........''
Sylwester: ''WHAT!?!?! Are you serious! This place is pathetic!''
Mr Torture: ''No........This........Home........''
Sylwester: ''Home? You have never had a home! Nobody cares about you and I am the only one that will, so stop whining like a little girl and come on!''
Mr Torture: ''GRAH!!!!!!!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!''
*Mr Torture starts destroying everything around him and holds Sylwester Tyrone by the throat*
Sylwester: ''Help! Help! Security! Security!''
*Mr Torture starts to cry and runs away*
Mr Robooto: ''Well ladies and gentlemen, we seen this couple last week and everything seemed fine, is this the end of them already?''
Dr Louve: ''I don't know but stay Mr Torture!''

I am just practising so please comment

Looks pretty good (y)

You were just recruited and now you want to get rid of your doctor? I want him around for a good while.

Admin wrote:You were just recruited and now you want to get rid of your doctor? I want him around for a good while.

It's best if you let people control there own storylines... as long as things are legit there shouldn't be a issue with him going with his own flow.